There's things here I absolutely adored; the whole found-footage-y CCTV aesthetic is really powerful, and you definitely know how to use that in a way to build some sort of anxiety. Sound effects really helped give a real sense of space as you moved around; as far as putting yourself in an environment, this project does wonders.
With that said... Some things stood out to me, stuff like there really being no *reason* to not just update the camera after every step; while it adds some character to the locomotion in the game, it feels like an unnecessary step, imo? That, and things mentioned elsewhere in the comments, stuff like lack of communication during the panel. Still, considering those are like, my only big issues with the game, I'd say you did a great job! Would absolutely love to see this expanded one; definitely gonna keep an eye on this team's work, moving forward.