Hey! I updated the page and I'm pretty happy with it now :) I think it's much more efficient and a better use of the space, a few of the things you mentioned I was already aware of but a couple were great ideas!! I still have a couple more things I need to do but I need a little more time to prepare those.
Do you mind checking it out again and letting me know if you think it's better? I'm also curious if you think I still have too many screenshots, whether or not I should delete or change any of them, and also if you think the use of the red bear multiple times is redundant (should I use different monsters in every screenshot?)
Thank you again so much!! Link for convenience:
https://yanako-rpgs.itch.io/yanas-montamer-maker