I think it's an interesting start. The text didn't seem to line up with the text boxes when I was playing in fullscreen mode. Also I couldn't seem to get the torch working properly to open the door. I played around with it for a while, but couldn't get the weld line to work. Adding choices and mini games definitely help keep the player engaged.
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