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Here are some issues I saw with the steam page on first look

1) I believe 'presented in' is correct in this scenario

2) Progression not progresion, you missed an 's'

Just wanted to help if that's fine, sorry if this came across as high and mighty or like I'm trying to be an asshole


This sentence sounded odd to me, I believe there should be a 'to' here

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This is nice, but I guess asking the dev themselves if they would like feedback, would make you come off as less of what you said. I personally don't think you are, and these are some great editor remarks.

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Thanks got it corrected