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Just finished running The Twin Train Typewriter Trial tonight, and the crew had a blast. They split up, with one pair burgling one typewriter (with only the minor inconvenience of having to bundle an unconscious porter out a train window), while the other involved distracting the witch while seducing the captain...and ended with a VOLUNTARY leap out the train window. Great fun from a very well-written scenario!

My only piece of feedback is this: On p. 32, you write, "Until recently, the machines sat in the embassy in Imperial City and U’Duasha". If that's where they were, why/how would one of them be on a train out of Doskvol?

Re: P32 - It's a poorly constructed sentence, and bizarrely something that popped into my head a couple of weeks ago. I think it was part of another idea that I dropped but forgot to edit the sentence. Will fix it, thank you!

Very thrilling to hear - poor porter! Thank you for taking the time to report back!