Sorry I played like a week ago so I forgot somethings...
Pros:
Atmosphere.
It had a nice atmosphere, music scene and such, that built up to the monster. With the atmosphere the way that it was it made you really interested to see when ad where the scares were.
Intro cut scene.
The intro cut scene also helped to set the world up a little. It added a bit of "pre-game" interest.
Cons:
Lack of Direction.
I found myself lost more often then not and one of the locations I just so happened to stumble upon. And at one of the locations there was a note of instructions that I couldn't quite do (which could have been on me).
No "Scares"
I'm not a biggest fan of jumpscares but I can't help but think this game could have benefited from one or two of them. The "scare factor" of this game was completely gone once you saw the monster the first time but there was still quite a bit of game left.
All in all it started pretty strong but dropped the ball early and left it there.
If there is more to it could you let me know I'll go back and check out whatever I missed. I've also played the smiling man and left feedback on that. I think I will check out more from you. Thank You for the game. Keep it up.