I'll preface my review by saying I didn't play the game myself (I don't play horror games), but I watched GameGushGamer play it on his stream.
I really liked the dual-perspectives thing, going from first person to third person and vice versa is really creative and interesting. Having to use some tools with both hands makes perfect in-universe sense too, great job there.
I watched to the shower scene, when I saw blood start to appear, I immediately closed the stream. Seeing the person/creature move around before that had been creepy enough, for sure. Even though I stopped watching at that point, it still creeped me out for a long time and it was hard to fall asleep that night, so great job there! :)
One suggestion is to maybe have the other characters in the mess hall move around and do something rather than stand in place, so the environment feels more alive?