Thank you for the review! If you don’t mind me asking, which parts in particular came out as stiff and unnatural?
there's this one part where hubbybot goes to the mc's school and there's a conversation between the professor, hubbybot, and the mc, i dont know if its just me, but it doesnt feel like a natural conversation? there's also a scene in the hot springs where hubbybot assures the mc by saying "You've done well thus far mc." it doesnt quite fit with hubbybot's personality and stuff-
there's just some certain dialogue that feels like filler, but it could probably be easily changed or replaced
Sorry for the delayed response! Thank you for letting me know, I had personally thought that line had fit HubbyBot’s personality due to him providing a lot of positive affirmation, but I understand that looking back it seems kind of unnatural and “forced” for lack of better word. I’ll be sure to try to make more naturally flowing dialogue in the sequel!