I cannot tell you how much I absolutely enjoyed this. You folks are extremely talented storytellers. The way your scenes are set, the narration, the buildup, not to mention the art and animations.......it's masterful work. You guys really, really have a nack for storytelling. I do want to find out if you folks have a Patreon or Discord community because we need to support talents like yourselves so we can continue to enjoy your works.
I have had problems with script error messages in the Steam version which seems to be related to Steam achievements. It's a minor bother. If I could make one suggestion (not a complaint by any stretch), it would be this. The painstaking detail you guys use to weave the erotic scenes is palpable mostly because of the narration & dialog. However, the kissing scenes really don't seem to match the tale of what's happening at the time. Perhaps this is a limitation of the engine being used. For example, you have a moment like that in this most recent Chapter (7) between Alex and Jaye. The hunger and desire being told at the time isn't being done any justice by the paltry visualization of the kissing. In real life, two people with that sort of hunger would be wrapped in deep kisses for a long period. You could see in their faces. But unfortunately, all we see are what seem to just be pecks and maybe the tips of tongues touching each other. If its possible to better illustrate the kind of hungry, passionate kisses that your narration is weaving, please look into that. I don't want to have to imagine it in my own mind because what I'm seeing doesn't really match it. If it is a limitation of the engine, then please disregard. I can imagine how badly you might wish you could do such things in that circumstance. This is just such a masterful work; I would love to see it illustrated to match what the words & music are telling.
This is some of the best work I've ever beheld in an AVP and I truly hope to be able to see more. Thank you for sharing this vision with us :)