It doesn't make sense after you hit the gas and leave, -> get a new identity it says "the lady" but there is no lady at that point
There are actually 18 endings not 16.
Also you have a typo limo as lima and "i couldn't go bakc there"
"tokk" tiny sips
If this game had anime graphics added (and was fully yaoi/yuri) it would be trendy and amazingly popular