Thank you for the feedback :) I get what you are saying, it is a bit of a long build up. I think in my head I was thinking that the first part is like a cinematic section where the characters are attacking Green Tail whilst he does nothing, other than dodging and deflecting until the break when he says "Now it's my turn" (I did record some vocal lines but didn't have the time to edit them so got rid of them).
Again! Thank you