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https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1823152473
Hi! I'm part of feedback quest and I reviewed your game. I'm a Illustrator and a Twitch Streamer by name of "ILYA_N_O_K". The vod is posted. feel free to check it out.
But here are my feedback review so far. Your game is very interesting. I was intrigued by it mostly because of the artwork. I played almost 30 mins and i had fun with it.
But I encountered some few problems when getting into the game.
-No Main Menu Music.
-The controls are nice. But since I have played RPG GAMES before I was familiar of how to play it.
But instructions would be nice for new players that are new to RPG GAMES.
-Add menu to adjust music.
-The environment can use some work. But I like the visuals of the character.
-I have idea suggestion to have the starting point of where their house is or where they live.
find the clues of how Strawberry disappeared that leads you where the area you go where you start fighting these inkblots.
-The items can use some description of what are they.
-No "Health" Bar [no HP BAR] indicator on the Monsters you encounter. There's no telling if they are dying or not.
-Too many jump encounters. The music can have some work when about to go fight the inkblots. The music changes so suddenly that I get jump scares often but its alright.
-There's no description what is "Inkblots". Blueberry could have some dialogue when first time encountering it. So she can explain what it is and why.
-Tiling is too bright and very repetitive.
- I have another suggestion idea when it comes finding a chest. I dunno if you can make the game focus on Blueberry instead like zoomed on her.
Cause you can see everything is already because you see it as flat environment.You easily can see where the chests are.
For examples like games RPG like "IB" and "Mad father" can help you with referencing.
- Item Crafting can be good idea. Since you fight a lot of monsters on the way. Finding Blueberry Bandages is pretty quite low. Since you encounter a lot of monsters before you get to a new chest. like from plants or berries she finds to craft.
- I cant really tell what is the environment is.
-The fight with the boss Inkblot was really interesting!. Because there is no escape option when you start to fight it. It makes the player want to prepare and level up first and take save precautions when it comes to risk of defeating the Boss inkblot.
That's all I can say. I look forward of how your game will turn out in the future. Thank you for your hard work.