I absolutely love the artistic direction of this game! Definitely one of the more visually appealing entries in this jam! Even the itch.io page looks good and it's great to see that you plan to continue development and are going as far as to create devlogs.
Managing to include local multiplayer in your first jam is incredibly impressive especially seeing that it's pretty well polished!
In terms of critiques the other reviewers here have covered the bases really well so I unfortunately don't have any criticisms beyond what everyone else has provided, just keep working at it and I think you'll have a really cool looking and unique product here. I'm excited to see where this project goes.
I'm also new to game jams so I totally get having bugs in the game, honestly great work even finishing the project as that can be a trial in of itself. Best of luck in your future development!