Thank you very much for the feedback, I found what you said very helpful. I agree that the synopsis is too expositional, and I also think it needs to be more vague. Anyway, I am in the process of updating the project and I have great news—I am fixing some English errors (since I am Brazilian and not very familiar with the language) and I am implementing voice acting into the game. The post-jam version will have additional content, and there will also be some extra explanations of the story.