I loved the art direction of the game and the story was interesting. The mechanic of how the conversiation progress was the most interesting thing for me. I´m really happy to see that tehre is people trying to innovate how we manage conversation in games and the place they have in them.
My only critique is that I felt it was a bit slow pased and that sometimes I had to click twice for it to register the interaction.
You have a great future if you keep exploring this game ideas.