A good game for kids, could be a good NES version with the physical release.
The reading was a bit tiresome, and I was an avid reader in primary school, well, I would be bored a bit. The tone of the game is friendly enough already, I think.
The town theme is too intense. In my opinion, all music should be slowed down for the chill effect: I see no point in gloriolising the gig economy for the primary schooler
And a final nitpick, no dollar-counting variable is an unease.