Hey! ^^ i've already left a review of this VN, which i'm going to be changing now it's finished, but i would like to give you a much longer, and more critiquing review as well, as i would really like to point out area's of improvement and go over them. my 'official' review will be a lot more simple, and positive, because over all this was a wonderful little VN, but i do really want to talk to you about areas to improve.
Is there any way of contacting you privately to do so? (furaffinity?) i don't want to waste your time if my advice won't help, but, this could have been, one of the best NSFW VN's i've ever had the pleasure to read! It was... amazing <3