Excellent submission, great use of the theme, audio and simple but solid mechanics to weave your escape. I really liked this concept as it toys with serious matters like home abuse and loneliness. I would like it to be a bit longer so as to be able to find out a bit more on the two main characters relationship, their past and the abuser's personality.
I can see this concept grow to a longer and more serious psychological thriller/interactive novel which could increase awareness for this subject matter. A well rounded and bold submission, congrats!