Ugh, this is what I aspire to make. Disgustingly well done. And super polished, especially for a jam game. The vibe is amazing; the art and music work so well that I can't believe it all wasn't made specifically for this game, and the way the writing weaves together each side amazingly, while still capturing the different perspectives in the different dimensions and really selling how the "misunderstanding" comes to be. Just wow.
Don't think I've got a negative to be honest. Since I always try to give something folks could improve, I might just echo that being presented with the passages next to each other is a bit disorienting (and maybe intimidating (?) with the amount of text, if that makes any sense), at least in the start of the game.
But really, that's nitpicking. I want to become this game. I freaking love it.