I think I've only seen one or two other games that had a similar "echolocation" type of effect, and I freaking love it every time. This game was so cool and effective as a puzzle game, and I think you did a great job!!
My only critique is that on the third puzzle, I found myself lost in pitch black darkness and couldn't find any sort of reference point. After walking in various directions and aiming the camera for a few minutes, I ended up giving up. I'd be careful about any lightless, silent areas you have.
But overall, really well done.