What I expect to see in act III:
-More menu choices for dialogue. for example, you have been teased. I'm the dominant type of male so I would like to have more control over what the MC says instead of the "I.." or "What?" reactions which he seems to say 99.9% of the time. It's good character development but yeah...I would like to have choices on that please.
-Optional Lesbian scenes. I was at least glad you didn't add male scenes in there. I would've deleted the game right there and then. For example, Mida is a hot chick. But hearing that she likes women too is weird for some of us. I can easily ignore/skip the scenes but it would be nice to have a complete choice over it.
-I liked what you did in act II in the end. Making the character at least start using his brains. I was getting annoyed by some of the dialogue...sorry.
-Boost the character's physical strength a bit. I was humiliated when I had to use a spell to win against Elisabeth.
That's all really. The game is one of the best I've played. But not all games are perfect because making visual novels is mostly people bringing their own beliefs and imaginations to life. But at the same time you are expecting to gain support to earn a few bucks or overall just share your ideas and have other people enjoy your game. which now brings me to those Critiques I typed above. You made a very good game. But for me to criticise some of the errors or mistakes made in the game, it means you still need to win my and other people's votes. Again...I enjoyed your game but I didn't like some things which can easily be fixed through the simple menu choice. Goodluck!