An old style, relaxing text adventure which brought me back to the times when I would spend my days reading this kind of stuff!
So far I've completed two of the initial fetch quests and I'll say, I'm enjoying your writing style! A couple descriptions (the box you have to bring to Thalia in particular) really triggered that odd mechanism which make me almost "see" what I'm reading about.
Having to complete all of them might become a bit repetitive, still I guess it's OK since this is the very beginning of the adventure (I can think of many games whose initial tasks are rather... dull). I look forward to you adding more variety to the missions our hero has to accomplish in the future.
So yeah... Keep writing ^_^