This was nice! I really enjoy delivering realistic depictions of BDSM through the furry VN medium. It also shines a light on some of the complexities of open or nebulous relationships, which I think is super valuable as well.
Writing was solid! Sentence structure is fantastic. I think the character dialogue could have used some work (feel free to DM me if you want more feedback on it). This was a great first effort, you should be proud :3.