Thanks for the update!
Have you thought about the possibility of raising some more funds and outsourcing some of the writing? I'm already a backer of the original campaign, however I'd be happy to donate more money if it would help with bringing in assistance for writing/editing and programming.
GB Patch Games recently outsourced some of the writing for the Baxter Dlc and I think a really good job was done with capturing the voice of the character and the overall feel of an Our Life story.
Best of luck with Made Marion' s development. I'm looking forward to the early access release, whenever it happens, and I want you to know that Marion is one of my favourite protagonists for an Otome/Amare game.