Interesting game. I liked it a lot. You gave me some inspirations for my own interactive fiction.
However, the Linux version doesn't work, so I had to use Wine to get this thing working. Could you look over it?
Unfortunately, this isn't possible with Gamemaker Studio.
But I figured out the problem. You need some libraries for the game works. I have included in the .zip file a text file explaining the circumstance and listing the libraries needed and how to install them.
I know that it's not ideal, but it's what I can do.