lots of some errors (mostly text) i have found.
1. (text) At the start when you are deciding what Alfa should call Tinker you say "how should she call me". It should be "what should she call me" or "how should she refer to me"
2. (continuity) near the start of chapter two when emee first visits and tinker appears in her towel, MC still says blond hair. since the sprite update it needs to be changed to "brown" or just "hair". (you could make it joke about it not being MCs becuase they never brush their hair)
3. (BUG or TEXT) when you unlock the six images, characters still say nine so either 3 are missing or it needs to be reduced to 6. (Three more would be nice though?
4. (text) When talking to the fish lady you say "release my friend and I'm telling you" It should be "release my friend and I'll tell you"
!! SERIOUS POSSIBLE INFRINGEMENT ISSUE. The first part of the tentacle you find still looks like the Disney one; when you find it with the drone.
5. (text) Screen pop ups often still say "Patreon quest" instead of "side quest"
6. (bug) Astrid's hairstyle is messed up. She starts with it down, then in her first interaction when you click the "???" and say "I wonder what you would look like with your hair down" she puts it up.
7. (text) with Rapunzel cannibal is spelt wrong; it has 2 n's and the line about Rabbits should be "are" not "is"
8. (text) when Astrid ask for scraps she says "11eight"
9. (visual bug) When you enter the snow cave 16 and Emee makes the comment about her toes turning blue her mouth drops far too low into her chin
10. (text) When you give tinker the winter dress the dialogue should be "blows" not "blow"
11. (math) Giving snow 5 cloth costs you 225 after the cost increase and she gives 3 Clothes data sets worth... 225. Where as if you only give her 1 you actually gain 30 credits...
12. (text) during the winged coin tinker refers to snow as a "his" instead of "hers"
13. (text) "Watch the plans" in Emees electronic parts menu should be "View the plans"
14. (bug) Bicorn hat unlocks well before you finish the quest to get it.
15. (bug) Astrid's altered dresses seem to be missing from her dress menu. so far can only select the full unaltered one or the Breeze
16. (bug) When Astrid ask for the 14 cloth it doesn't actually take any from your inventory.
17. (text) vibrator quest, Astrid says "when you see me" should be 'When you saw me" both times.
18. (text) Near the start of part three MC says to Tinker "Do you know something named like that?" it should be "Do you remember any androids with names like that?"
19. (visual bug) When snow wears the great princess dress her neck is on top of her head.
20. the dialogue option for stripping is "make a strip" this doesnt make sense. I suggest you change it to "strip" or "strip her" but "request she strips" or "ask her to strip" work as well
21. (visual bug) when Emee wears the overalls without the bra her nipple is to high and off center.
22. (MAJOR BUG) When i first got the three red crystals the next day visiting Emee did not trigger anything and then the day after i got the alarm convo from tinker. I was able to load an earlier save and did nothing else. But i think creating a hairstyle was the most likely thing interrupting the quest from triggering
23. (text) when you ask Emee for outfits for Rapunzel she says "if i come across this," it should be "if i come across something,"
24. (text) when to talking melisandre about Ai she says "you could go ham with them" it should be "you can go ham on them"
25. (text) At the start of part 4 tinker says "personally its already done" when talking about MC being a thief. I think i know what you mean from context but in all reality the sentence makes no sense. it needs to be reworded.
26. (text) When talking about the sphinx, milisandre says "this android" it should be "that android"
27. Lagrethas first line should be "I don't understand a word you've said" or "I don't understand a word your saying"
28. "The highest weather administrator in the land" NOT administrator weather.
chapter 4 has so many English text errors I have given up recording. Thats really bad.
If you want me to fix it send me a text file
SALTY PLEASE HIRE SOMEONE for chapter two to check your English cause this is ridiculous. I want to just enjoy the game i paid for on steam but this is definitely not a complete game.