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Will you add an option to disable the incest? perhaps with slightly different text for the conversation with your mother?

that's awesome. Keep up the good work!

i Cant get the tavern keepers signature I have all the reat

when downloaded the game appears as a media file and the option to extract is greyed out

Salty, I saw that the chapter 2 page will go live on steam soon but i gotta ask, what are you doing about English?

Your game is amazing and high quality but my enjoyment of chapter 1 was massively reduced due to the poor English translation. I hope you have managed to find someone to edit your work before release. Im sure your making enough to afford it now.

Are the DLC canon? if so when should they be played in relation to the story

Bug: the reduce damage for two turns skill never works on the first turn. and Armour does nothing unless you block the whole attack? I swear that didn't used to be how it worked?

Question: Is there any point to choosing non-nice guy answers, does it unlock darker scenes or does it just have a negative effect in general with  no perks?

do you want help with the english?

can incest be avoided or is there an option that changes the text to step or something else entirely

is there any difference between this version and the patreon one?

is there a releuctance route option in this game. ie the character doesn't want to do stuff but is pressured into it?

Will do. Whats with the readme in the game files?

I don't understand? Can I ungrey it out later?

just noticed that. Nice cameo. It's how he appears in another game as well isn't it. Ripples I think it was?

Anne is greyed out. Im fairly certain i made the right decision in letting her stay with you when she is scared. I went back and tried the other route and that greyed out as well.

IS stabby mike in the game?

At the end of chapter 11 lily says "dad" instead of "your dad" when her and the others meet in your cabin to discuss the next steps.

Also in the Incest free version of the first sex scene with lily the "my girl" doesn't quite sound right, i suspect its because you changed "my sister" to "my girl" but it would help immersion if it was changed to just "lily" for example.

"my girl was regarding me a little uncomfortably after..."

"lily was regarding me a little uncomfortably after..."

or even better

"lily was regarding me carefully after... (since its not really as naughty)

I honestly don't know how much work this sort of change would be and i understand if your not keen. but it would be nice for those not as into such interesting fetishes.

I want to reiterate that i appreciate you putting the no incest mode in in the first place since this is such an amazing game.

no I don't think it's abandoned. It's like a part time project for the devs. It's good. But you have to wait. Maybe the game will be finished by 2047, roughly?

nope. They are the slowest devs in the genre and rarely make any sort of post even on their patreon.

Its an amzing game but honestly wait if you can the devs are active just the slowest ones in the whole genre, i supported the patreon for 8 months+, back in 2020, and there wasn't a single update.

yeah, I love this game but, that's an excuse. Maybe justifies 6 month each, a year at a stretch. This game started in 2017 and the last update was 2020. These Dev's are just slow. Really slow.

Oh my god Salty. I love your game man but the English is so bad. I thought you would have hired someone for the steam release.

Please fix it.

I created a list of all the bugs i found in a previous comment.

lots of some errors (mostly text) i have found.

1. (text) At the start when you are deciding what Alfa should call Tinker you say "how should she call me". It should be "what should she call me" or "how should she refer to me"

2. (continuity) near the start of chapter two when emee first visits and tinker appears in her towel, MC still says blond hair. since the sprite update it needs to be changed to "brown" or just "hair". (you could make it joke about it not being MCs becuase they never brush their hair)

3. (BUG or TEXT) when you unlock the six images, characters still say nine so either 3 are missing or it needs to be reduced to 6. (Three more would be nice though?

4. (text) When talking to the fish lady you say "release my friend and I'm telling you" It should be "release my friend and I'll tell you"

!! SERIOUS POSSIBLE INFRINGEMENT ISSUE. The first part of the tentacle you find still looks like the Disney one; when you find it with the drone.

5. (text) Screen pop ups often still say "Patreon quest" instead of "side quest"

6. (bug) Astrid's hairstyle is messed up. She starts with it down, then in her first interaction when you click the "???" and say "I wonder what you would look like with your hair down" she puts it up.

7. (text) with Rapunzel cannibal is spelt wrong; it has 2 n's and the line about Rabbits should be "are" not "is"

8. (text) when Astrid ask for scraps she says "11eight"

9. (visual bug) When you enter the snow cave 16 and Emee makes the comment about her toes turning blue her mouth drops far too low into her chin

10. (text) When you give tinker the winter dress the dialogue should be "blows" not "blow" 

11. (math) Giving snow 5 cloth costs you 225 after the cost increase and she gives 3 Clothes data sets worth... 225. Where as if you only give her 1 you actually gain 30 credits...

12. (text) during the winged coin tinker refers to snow as a "his" instead of "hers"

13.  (text) "Watch the plans" in Emees electronic parts menu should be "View the plans" 

14. (bug) Bicorn hat unlocks well before you finish the quest to get it.

15. (bug) Astrid's altered dresses seem to be missing from her dress menu. so far can only select the full unaltered one or the Breeze

16. (bug) When Astrid ask for the 14 cloth it doesn't actually take any from your inventory.

17. (text) vibrator quest, Astrid says "when you see me" should be 'When you saw me" both times.

18. (text) Near the start of part three MC says to Tinker "Do you know something named like that?" it should be "Do you remember any androids with names like that?"

19. (visual bug) When snow wears the great princess dress her neck is on top of her head.

20. the dialogue option for stripping is "make a strip" this doesnt make sense.  I suggest you change it to "strip" or "strip her" but "request she strips" or "ask her to strip" work as well

21. (visual bug) when Emee wears the overalls without the bra her nipple is to high and off center.

22. (MAJOR BUG) When i first got the three red crystals the next day visiting Emee did not trigger anything and then the day after i got the alarm convo from tinker. I was able to load an earlier save and did nothing else. But i think creating a hairstyle was the most likely thing interrupting the quest from triggering

23. (text) when you ask Emee for outfits for Rapunzel she says "if i come across this," it should be "if i come across something,"

24. (text) when to  talking melisandre about Ai she says "you could go ham with them" it should be "you can go ham on them"

25. (text) At the start of part 4 tinker says "personally its already done" when talking about MC being a thief. I think i know what you mean from context but in all reality the sentence makes no sense. it needs to be reworded.

26. (text) When talking about the sphinx, milisandre says "this android" it should be "that android"

27. Lagrethas first line should be "I don't understand a word you've said" or  "I don't understand a word your saying"

28. "The highest weather administrator in the land" NOT administrator weather.

chapter 4 has so many English text errors I have given up recording. Thats really bad.

If you want me to fix it send me a text file

SALTY PLEASE HIRE SOMEONE for chapter two to check your English cause this is ridiculous. I want to just enjoy the game i paid for on steam but this is definitely not a complete game.

Same for me the page for 1 is missing. Where should i report steam bugs. I completed tinkers dress quest and she said she would unlock her hair options but the only hair options I have are all for snow including the greyed out ones.

what genres/themes are in this game?

what fetishes are in this? do you touch on any darker themes?

Yep. A couple of times I had to roll back because mc said sister instead of friend.

The steam version doesn't lock in the disabled incest. Every time i load a save i have to enable and re disable incest or otherwise it reverts to the incest version.

What sort of fetishes can we experience in the game?

You found it and... Its abandoned. Damn.

Bug in my steam copy: after the misson where you get the bones and return to your ship, when you talk to Lilly you say "hey sis". I am on the incest disabled version. I double checked.

Edit: it happened in the drink with her and thyia scene after as well but toggling the incest and reloading twice fixed it.
where should i post bugs in the future?

@Perverteer Bug in my steam copy: after the misson where you get the bones and return to your ship, when you talk to Lilly you say "hey sis". I am on the incest disabled version. I double checked.

Ok cheers! Looking forward to it.

Is it something outside your control, like a steam rule/regulation?

does the game have actual nudity?
and where do I find Didnapper 1?

How long until the steam release. I wanna buy it and give you money but its been coming soon for ages now.  

Also want to clarify the steam one will have all content including the old patron exclusive stuff?

oh thats all good, dont apoligise. your games are amazing.

Wait whos the guy? Ive seen him before?

What are the anime you watch with Jessica.  Becasue i havent seen it(them?). I dont know how to answer jessicas question. What wierd thing are they eating? could you include the anime names maybe slightly different like you do for everything else?

Its speaking slang. It doesnt need to follow normal text convention. You can tell me you never heard someone speak like that dawg?