hi there i just want to comment saying that i really enjoyed what you have put out so far its really impressive, there are some inconsistencies is dialogue but that is to be expected, so keep up the work and i look forward to the next update and hope everything goes okay with getting your laptop working good again will donate soon.
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Thank you very much for the feedback. Sometimes at 3am I think about a few moments in what In what I've written so far and become completely overwhelmed by cringe. I don't think I'll be able to have a good night's sleep until I rewrite those parts so that is the first thing I'll do once I get my laptop in order.
Also can you please point out some of the places with issues so I can fix them up before the next release ?
Thanks again for the feedback, the almost complete lack of it has had me worried for quite sometime.
hi there so i went back through and found some of the grammatical errors i took some screenshots but im sorry if they are not much help lol, i also wrote down some maybe quality of life changes, but they are just suggestions as you're the one developing the game so what you says goes here is a link with the screenshots and also my notes, i hope this helps it really has been a wonderful game so far and i cant wait for the next update, let me know if something is wrong with the link https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1HwGYzeRYZPqBL5gAaoyJw8bckhrRpUf8?usp=sha...