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Thank you very much for the feedback. Sometimes at 3am I think about a few moments in what In what I've written so far and become completely overwhelmed by cringe. I don't think I'll be able to have a good night's sleep until I rewrite those parts so that is the first thing I'll do once I get my laptop in order.

Also can you please point out some of the places with issues so I can fix them up before the next release ? 

Thanks  again for the feedback, the almost complete lack of it has had me worried for quite sometime.

i will play through it again and take some notes on the inconsistencies and also maybe take some screenshots if you want

That would be much appreciated.

hi there so i went back through and found some of the grammatical errors i took some screenshots but im sorry if they are not much help lol, i also wrote down some maybe quality of life changes, but they are just suggestions as you're the one developing the game so what you says goes here is a link with the screenshots and also my notes, i hope this helps it really has been a wonderful game so far and i cant wait for the next update, let me know if something is wrong with the link  https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1HwGYzeRYZPqBL5gAaoyJw8bckhrRpUf8?usp=sha...

The link works, thank you. I'll fix these as soon as my laptop is up and running.

awesome, there should also be a text document in there as well hopefully it is intact, hope they help even if a little bit