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There’s a few typos I found that I’ll list here:

Otherwise, the game was so wonderful I spent days thinking about it afterwards and begging for the full release!!! I’m typing this comment merely because of my love for the game–not dislike.

This is my second time playing, that’s how much I liked the game and why I can spot typos better now.

“If you had gone off to make a bunch of babies, your bloodline would persist with this anomaly.” - Violo

“I sat down with a sigh, realizing they’d put me between them again.” - MC

There’s probably more, so I’ll update this, but again, THANK YOU!

Bold words mean the corrected word, in the original there’s a typo.

I LOVE YOU STYGIANEYE!!!! Off to playing your other games to deal with the post-game (demo?) depression.

Stygian Eye Stories1 year ago(+5)

Thank you so much! As I was injured \right before the jam was closed, we weren't able to do a proper final pass over the script one more time, so I'll make sure to note these corrections down for cleanup.

This is just the first bit of the game. I'm working on the rest, but I've been focused on recovering from my injury and dealing with writer's block. I will finish this game. It's just slow rolling at the moment while I tackle real-life shenanigans. I've made some progress though, which I hope is good news ^.^

eirdonne1 year ago(+2)

I’m so grateful you replied :D (Looking back, my comment sucked and made little sense, so I hope that’s alright.)

I’m so sorry you got injured, I hope you’re better now! And it’s totally alright to deal with writer’s block, but I’m sure whatever you end up publishing will be worth it. You inspired me quite a bit to write my own visual novel, so I completely understand the feeling of writer’s block.

With that off the table, I hope real life isn’t being too harsh on you! The game is already perfect, and I love Violo and Vivere so much (and the little Easter egg in Sacrarium Gelus), so I’m excited to see how the game will end. Your characters feel very real, humane. Hopefully there’s a tab in the full game for side stories ;p!

Anyways, final runthrough and here’s a list of noteable things in a text document because there were quite a few tiny ones. I hope I didn’t come offensive by pointing at these silly things! I’m sorry if I’ve wasted your time and this ended up pointless, but if I can help in any way, I’m glad.

Link to the document. I’ll update it as I go on! :3

eirdonne1 year ago(+1)

(Please tell me if I should continue the list or leave it at that. I don’t mind scanning through the entire demo if needs be :p)

Stygian Eye Stories1 year ago(+2)

Oh no no no. You weren't being offensive at all. I do truly appreciate the extra assistance with it. Bug reports and typo reports are very important for in-development VNs, so I make sure to note all of them down as they come in. That way I can get them during clean up. Your words are very kind as well, so really thank you ^.^

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