I'm wondering why a MC with a criminal background, acts dumb and innocent with Roman? Also when did they decide they wanted to talk to the detective? Seemed to just pop up there regardless of how cooperative had been before. Also any chance MC will get to do something more involved, or is it the intention that they 'have to' be an 'unwilling' participant?
Maybe just me though. I do tend to like playing non-innocent characters myself. Although difficult to find good stories can play them.