Cool visuals! Love the setting, very stylish design.
Maybe there's too much text, but I believe it can be solved (if decided to) with hiding the previous text, when the new paragraph appears.
Didn't get that spells have some kind of a force field at first, so stuck for a while in the beginning. Maybe it wasn't too obvious...
Text and dialogues are asking for more choices and freedom, but it's the matter of time and for the jam it's best to get your story straight, which you masterly did!
Wished for a change of music on locations (or maybe a switch to some ambient/drone scapes). But that's already asking too much.
Still had some time stuck finding the best way to put a spell (and oh so hard to get the Shrines done, although it's understandable - yet hardcore doable) but really enjoyed the flow of your game. Very cool journey in the Japanese setting, somewhat cute and entertaining, thanks!