I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Story (3):
I wasn’t expecting to have a story about self-worth with a title and thumbnail like that.
But something something don’t judge a book by its cover something something.
My main gripe is still that the story ends too soon. Like there is a climax but no falling action.
Presentation (3):
You tried your hardest to do a few tricks with Ren’Py and I think it really paid off in the end.
The custom clothes was a nice touch that most people would’ve taken the easy way out and just have them go shirtless. The bulgy was extra wulgy.
Also making your own expressions is something I wish I was brave enough to attempt.
Creativity (2):
Not too much earth-shattering ground made here but that’s not what this jam is all about. It’s a homey with good-feels ending.
I will never forget how this is the first FVN that I played where someone chokes on dick and not in the sexy way.
Total (8):
The fact that you were one of the few new Developers that successfully used Layered/Composite Images is still something you should wear as a badge. There are lot of big-name FVN’s still being talked about that have never crossed that bridge.
I look forward to the CG’s that you said you might commission.
All-in-all, I think this was a great VN to welcome the summer with. (I say this will typing in a freezing basement in Wisconsin.)