I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Story (4):
I hope that one day, I too can have the kind of deep relationship that Xavier and Benny have. But I want to stay young forever!
You perfectly blended a MY WOLF with an I WOLF but the MY WOLF nullifies the I WOLF.
You wrote a lot but it doesn’t feel like needless fluff.
Out of all the VN’s in the Jam that were SFW, I wish that this one had the sexo.
Presentation (4):
I think redrawing the provided WOLF in your own style is such a dunk on everyone that if I didn’t give you at least 4 Stars then I would be doing the Jam a disservice.
I do hope that Sam and Rossi are at least designed without their mono-colored stylings.
I want to see fanart of them.
Creativity (4):
We’ve always seen MY WOLVES, falling in love with people. I think having us be married to the MY WOLF for decades is a nice twist.
I would’ve been better if they got divorced like that fake spoiler said.
Also a VN about writer’s block is very ingenious.
Total (12):
At fours all around, it’s very balanced meal. licks lips mock-vore-al-ly
I remember when you were first talking about it, that you made it sound like reverse Adastra. Going to Italy with a MY WOLF instead of a MY WOLF taking your from Italy. I’m very glad that this wasn’t an Adastra parody like I thought it was going to be. I do think the Adastra references were a little too on-the-nose but what do I know, Mr. Unagi Hasn’t Actually Play Adastra Yet And Won’t Until Interea Is Finished Because He Wants To See If Interea Holds Up On It’s Own Which It Really Hasn’t At Least Compared To Khemia
I hope that we get to see more of Sam and Rossi. Xavier and Benny have had their time in the limelight. I think it’s time for the lime thembo to get their chance.
It’s pretty long but remember that it is basically two stories one.
Also this reminded me that I still need to visit Venice. It was too far away when I studied abroad in Florence my Sophomore year of University.