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Played up until I got one ending! (8. Sorry about that)

Overall, really good writing and voice. I was sort of hoping for a bit more depth to the choices pre-date scene, like the possibility of not being able to afford everything. Also, the choice text is a light blue and sort of blends in with the light purple of the gradient, so that was a tiny bit hard to see.

I love Twine games and I think it's really cool that it has an inventory though! It's nice seeing the items on screen, not super typical. Seeing their date slowly progress throughout the day is really fun and cute, and I loved all the descriptions. I'll definitely be coming back to this one!!

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Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I'd considered doing something like the money idea early on, but I ended up being worried about people locking themselves out of endings and ended up never implementing it. Of course when I ended up working on it I ended up finding ways to make that not be an issue, but the idea to re-implement it just never came up. And yeah, the choice text was something I considered changing at some point, but for some reason I just never got around to doing it, so 'm sorry. I'll definitely be considering darkening that link color at some point.

Still, glad you enjoyed it.


EDIT: Went ahead and published the improved-highlights version. Don’t take that one into account with voting, but it’s in downloads.