This VN takes about 10 minutes, and is a short and sweet (emphasis on sweet) little read.
I find myself intrigued by the idea and potential of this story; Chimata has always been a fascinating character to me and this story makes an attempt to create some interesting characterizations for her and some of the other, newer characters. I'd have loved to see it more fleshed out, but I understand this was the team's first attempt at a VN and had a lot going on, so I can't judge too harshly. The Outside World stuff was a tad confusing (a fuller explanation for context would have certainly helped in this respect), though some of it is no fault of the writers; "rainbow capitalism" can sometimes have a negative connotation, so it was hard to shake that out of my head when reading, which likely impacted my perspective at least a little bit.
All in all, I found the premise to be solid, the main pairing to be particularly interesting and the writing to be very sweet and full of innocence and compassion. If there's interest in making this a bigger project, I'd love to see the final project. (Also, props to making it support multiple languages, that's something which isn't in many of these submissions!)