What an interesting story. Even though there were numerous translation errors, I still could understand the story. I liked the atmosphere of the environment and I could tell that a lot of work was put into this. Good job.
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Thank you for your comments and great suggestions.
I was not sure how to contact you, so I have created a spreadsheet. Anyone can edit this.
There is of course a .txt file available as well, similar to Ren'py's other games.
I know this is a great burden for you, so please do not hesitate to change your mind.