Well there maynot be a lot of content yet as it seems only a little was added with this update, but nonetheless heres a sandwich. As always it is 1 good, 1 bad, 1 good.
Let's start with the art style which is the biggest thing with all visual novels! It's so very bold to make an adult visual novel with chibi style characters. But yet I find that it's oddly alluring to an extent. Didn't have high hopes when I first saw it but it honestly works!
Now for something bad. My friend you need to proof read your dialogue. A lot of people who would play your game can leave bad reviews for that alone. I've seen it in quite a few different games.
And now to finish up the sandwich. Let's look at the music. It's pretty chill! Leaves a bit to be desired but I think it really works with the art style you've set off with.
All in all, though.. With what I've seen I'm not sure how long this novel can be without running out of content. Sure you can milk it out but people would get bored pretty quick. So my overall rating? 6 outta 10.