Thanks, but that is why I have been telling people when judging the game focus on the animations, renders, and character designs. As those are the main things that are in my control. I am slightly changing the story now to make Ryou less of a cuck using thought bubbles and stuff that were not in the doujin and also making him cheat on masaki in chapter 3. I also dropped some hints that maybe he hasnt been faithful at his school either, and since in the doujin he doesnt really have any personality at all, I am moving him more towards the jock bro stereotype to make people feel less bad for him, and more like hes getting what he deserves. The entire main plot in a nutshell is all about a girl realizing how fun sex can be and experiencing new things that makes her fall more and more into lust and corruption thinking more with her orgasms than with her brain or heart.