Everyone has told me that the art looks like it was made from a rough draft (Funny thing because I have to do like 3 of the same drawing for the final version.... I have a lot of room for improvement). So yes, I will provoke editing and always add details and lines to make them look as nice as possible. Plus hands and feet are the hardest thing for me to draw, I have to improve that too.
Sorry if it's annoying to ask but, what makes you consider the story funky? I'm not saying it's a wrong or far out way of looking at it, but I want to know.
Thanks for your comments!
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The character art, the strange names, and the angels. I'm not familiar with VNs though so I'm not sure how funky it is compared to others. Your art is still a thousand times better than mine (I'm a programmer XD), and the flat style makes it instantly recognizable compared to most VNs. I also think it's kinda cute ;).