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I got 1050$.

Really well done and polished jam submission. Detailed breakdown:

Pro:

  • nice custom made environment
  • very cohesive design, from colors to icons, small detail but makes a world of a difference
  • clearly marked ares of interaction
  • enough variety for a jam
  • goals to achieve

cons:

  • confusing at first even with the awesome infographic, the reality is, humans are bad at that lol, it’s usually not enough and you have to MAKE them do what you want without too much text. I think you came very close to that, actually. The next step would’ve been hiding/disabling all the interactions when they are not available, maybe make it open up as you’ve interacted with a stations at least once
  • I hate teleport movement, just a personal thing but I get why you would prioritize it
  • small stuff like objects phasing through the floor which already was addressed in other comments

Wow nice work! And thank you for providing a detailed breakdown it really helps, totally agree with your comments though, and really nice to hear some pros too!