Alright. As some of the others have posted, I *really* love the whole Dave encounter. Of course, despite being the initiator in that, I still leaned into the sub aspect. Riker is rather hot too and I was surprised he wasn't in the update at all. I got the impression the bar is going to be very central to all future events and Hank is going to be a kind of 'grounding' force for the MC. I also get the impression that poor Ian is going to be a victim no matter how it plays out. LOL.
From a technical point of view, I actually like how conversations work visually and the writing is good. Of course, there will always be the odd typo that slips through the cracks (Poor Ian likes confidence instead of lacks confidence - I think that was the typo). That bathroom at the bar looks fantastic! I was hoping there was a scene in there but alas... maybe in the future.
I'm really looking forward to seeing how this plays out. I also hope that the choice you make at creation will also play a part in the MC's life direction and not just be initial skills. Is this going to be an open-world type game (such as Young Marcus, Hornstown, etc) or is this closer to a CYOA? Either way is fine (hoping for the former but fine with the latter too). :) If there's anything specific you want my take on, feel free to mention it.