Oh, huh, you had a similar idea with different narrative themes! I liked it!
Felt a bit like The Stanley Parable played through the perspective of the narrator. Nice sense of humor to the dialogue. The prose was pretty solid & the gameplay was smooth & didn't really get in the way. The text spacing could feel just a hair dense at times, but I might be a bit spoiled by Disco Elysium & its focus on readability.
Good work!