Hello! Your game didnt work when I tried to play it on stream yesterday, since then the problem recurred so I took some time to fix it on my end! Hopefully feedback in the form of a comment makes up a tiny bit.
First of all the atmosphere is great, I absolutely loved the red dithering effect, it made the game very disorienting, but in a good way if you catch my drift. I also adore the concept, it slightly reminds me of a daddy longlegs (dont ask me why) game I saw when you basically had a multiplayer style horror game.
One gripe I had is that I didnt feel like there was much feedback after catching the player, it just kind of stopped for me. I also took a bit of time to understand the purpose of the pages, but eventually I got it.
Finally I'd like to praise the movement, it had just the right feel for the type of game. Overall it was just very well done, perhaps just lacking a bit of polish, but thats to be expected given the timeframe and scope. Well done!