The story itself is good no doubt. I can tell a lot of hard work has gone to this game and you have every right to be very proud of it. For me personally though I find parts of it frustrating. Though it's mostly a me problem. I just wish there was more choices on pivotal moments. Choices that shaped more in dialogue intense scenes. Basic choices like does he concede does he challenge when it comes to specifically his mother or sister telling him something. I am not yet completed with this playthrough I am writing this comment after most of the dialogue during the rooftop scene in the rain.
Let me end this comment saying despite that I do look forward to the rest of the story and more updates as well seeing how you tweak and change things in the future.