Happy Anniversary! *Applauds you All* Thank you for all your Hard Work; AR will be Amaze Balls~
Just played (LAST) uploaded demo - and you all did so well in Smoothing out Act 1. Been a while since I played previous demo, but the changes I caught really made everything Transition well and, overall, more Natural.
Something I wanted to bring to your attention, there were a few typos(I played Cat's route again because - FAV <3)
1. (While you're playing cricket with Morrigan) 'It rolls to the first wicked but doesn't quite reach.' Wicked -> Wicket
2. (When you go back to Cat's house after) 'The moment I walk in, cat runs right up to me.' Cat's name should be capitalized.
3. (When Alice talks about nature) 'The only nature I'm used to pigeons and cars.' Pretty sure there should be an 'are' in there.
Congrats again and Best of Luck with Acts 2 and 3!!!