The overall presentation is great! The artworks are amazing and this is also the only voice acted submission I've seen.
But I feel that in the presentation some key informations were left out. For example, an indicator of when Master Augusti would reach out to pick an ingredient. it seemed too random and too sudden, maybe a short animation could help. Or an explanation for the game overs, sometimes I felt like I did the correct thing but failed anyway.
Other than that I would suggest to check for bugs, that might be a factor that makes the game rules unclear.