I liked the presentation. The graphics, music and especially comic intros are very nice.
I had some issues with the controls, though. Like, using E to punch and Ctrl-E to interact feels awkward. And in the meat mini-game using E is also not convenient because when it finishes I end up hitting the NPC.
Also, the game appeared to restart randomly a couple of times, not sure why.
That aside, congratulations on your entry!