Visually it’s very powerful; I like the black and white graphics and your choice of images to combine (is that Henry the VIII with his face scribbled out?), and the core concept is at once understandable, an angle I haven’t seen before, and convincing. The words on the second spread feel – simple and direct almost to the point of being preachy, but the zine is very effective and I’m glad I read it. As someone else whose creations are (and will continue to be) closer to “zine” than “game” I really appreciated seeing this here!
Viewing post in looking for feedback on my first project/zine!
i really appreciate that! it was my first zine attempt, and i'm glad it came across well. i'm aware the poem might itself be a little clunky - though i still like it, i wrote it at like 2 am after a graveyard shift, so there's definitely some liminal feeling to it. thank you so much for the feedback!