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This is a fantastic piece of work. If anyone is reading this comment, please know that it's well worth the optional price. The art is high quality, consistent and distinctive, the fluidity of the animations is masterful, the soundscape has wonderful atmosphere, and your writing is always very eloquent. It did feel more like an "interactive, linear story", but your writing is solid, so that's not a bad thing. I'm stunned you put this together so quickly! Literally my only critique is that there were a couple of typos here and there, but it didn't ruin my immersion and is completely understandable with how quickly you got the game out (which is now redundant, they've been stamped out!) Looking forward to trying out the third ending tomorrow. Thank you for making this!

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Thank you Emm! Do you remember the typos? They escaped our vigilant eye...

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Not offhand, but if I remember in the near future I'll send you a message! There were only two or three, it was really minor. One of them was just use of 'an' instead of 'a' or something, I think.

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I think it was “What is it with you *an* puzzles”, right… ? Instead of *and*.

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Wow, thank you for the nice feedback! I've listened to almost all of your stream now, love the voice acting. Especially Xavian with all of his personalities and accents :).

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He's a complex character. 😅